Well, I tried to make a more serious painting this time.
The idea was all right, and the execution in many ways decent, the only problem is the interaction of the characters. Leaving the medic anonymous (which is a good thing, we won't focus on who he is) weakens the image - it is unclear if he or anyone mourns for the fallen person (soldier). I should have thought about that in the planning phase. But I didn't, so the result is not really as good as it could have been :|